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“Take that America! You
smart-ass!” Carlos, a.k.a Cuba roared as he beat down on who he
thought was America. The obnoxious young nation had been going
around, chanting ‘I’m the Hero!’ again and Cuba
politely asked him to shut his half-wit pie hole, he refused
to obey. So, naturally, Carlos wanted some revenge.


“M-maple!” Canada “yelled,”
-It was more of a quiet whine really- in discomfort. Why did this
have to happen? And today of all days…


“Hey! Carlos!”


Canada gasped and blush bright red.
_____ was early! Oh… and seeing him like this…


Carlos looked up and nodded at you.


“Hey chica, is America bothering
you too?” he asked with a glare at the Canadian who was
trembling beside him.


You sighed in exasperation. Cuba always
made this mistake.


“Carlos, that’s not
America. That’s Canada,” you tell him, pointing at the
shy blonde.


Cuba had a blank look for a moment, but
quickly adopted an apologetic one.


“Sorry man, you just look too
much like America,” Carlos muttered as he extended his hand to
Canada.


Canada nodded and took Cuba’s
hand. Cuba patted him gently and excused himself with another
apology.


Canada looked at you with tears in his
eyes.


“Oh _____, thank you!” he
said giving you a bear hug that you returned with a giggle.


“You’re welcome Matthew!”
you said with a smile, but it disappeared the minute you got a good
look at his bruises.


“Mattie, we need to get you
home.”


Canada began to protest, but stopped
when he realized how sore he was. He gave you a sheepish grin and a
nod as you both made your way back to his house.


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Le magical time
skip~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


Canada winced as you rubbed the ice
pack over the bruises on his back. You gave him an apologetic look,
but continued. You felt really frustrated. Sweet Canada was being
mistaken for that loud-mouthed American way too often. Sure, they had
the same face and build, but everything else about them were polar
opposites.


“_____, are you okay?” your
friend asked full of concern.


You looked up at him with a smile, he
was always so considerate, thinking of you even though he was the one
covered in undeserved bruises.


“I’m fine,” you
responded, “don’t worry.”


He turned his head away from you and
was very quiet and still for the remainder of his treatment.


“Mattie?”


“Hm?”


“You’re awfully quiet…”


“Sorry _____, I was just
thinking.”


“About?”


Canada turned with a blush painting his
features. ‘She’s always so considerate, thinking of me
when she could be doing something more productive. She notices me and
cares about me too.’


You tapped Canada’s shoulder. He
turned around quickly, deciding to act on a feeling he’d been
having for some time. He wrapped his arms around your torso and
kissed your lips gently.


Before you could react, he pulled away
with a very flustered look.


“_-____, I-I’m so sorry! I
couldn’t help myself!”


You stared blankly before bringing your
lips up to meet his in a sweet kiss of your own.


“_____?” he whispered,
“What was that for?”


You giggled quietly. “For being
so kind to me, Mattie.”


The Canadian gave you a real smile
before hugging you tightly.


“Merci, Mon
cher.”










A request from :iconiscribblekirklandz:! I hope you like it!


If you have a request, feel free to ask!


I do not own Canada, Cuba, or You.

Story owned by :icongracee314:
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:iconhinatathebloom1:
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute ^w^
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gracee314 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
Thanks~ I might remake this some time, though.
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:iconhinatathebloom1:
Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
Your welcome and that be cool ^^
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:iconthemelodyofthesoul:
TheMelodyOfTheSoul Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So cute!
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:icona-weird-ohioan:
A-Weird-Ohioan Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Must. Kill. Carlos.
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:icongracee314:
gracee314 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
I wish you luck with that.
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:icona-weird-ohioan:
A-Weird-Ohioan Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
the job is done *has a jumbo trash bag* I'm just gunna go and...burn this...what's the word...Cuban I MEAN garbage
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:icongracee314:
gracee314 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
You do that. Oh, say hi to Matthew for me!
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:icona-weird-ohioan:
A-Weird-Ohioan Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I sure will! *tosses bag in fire pit* teehee
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:iconprussiancrimsonheart:
Aww! Cute!
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:iconsunshineanddaises112:
sunshineanddaises112 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Omg, this is adorable.
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:icongracee314:
gracee314 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Thank you~ (Love your icon. Denmark FTW!)
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:iconsunshineanddaises112:
sunshineanddaises112 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome~. (Thanks! He looks so nice in that picture. I could send it to you if you want it.)
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:icongracee314:
gracee314 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Pretty please~?
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:iconsunshineanddaises112:
sunshineanddaises112 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Here ya go: [link]
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:icongracee314:
gracee314 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Thank you!
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:iconsunshineanddaises112:
sunshineanddaises112 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!
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:icondreamingblackleo:
DreamingBlackLeo Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
...Great, I just did a thing saying I was most like Cuba then I read this. Mattie I'm so sorry!!!! You just look too much like Alfred!!! :cries: :tantrum: <--( I love these so much, so cute! >u< )

Why do they even say they look like twins because they don't. I mean really, Italy and Romano look more alike than those two. The original drawing of Canada actually looks A LOT more like France, except for his hair is about an inch or two shorter, he has a curl, and he has glasses. Also, a lot of countries actually DO notice Canada, like Netherlands who gives him flowers every year (*cough**cough* SHIP IT *cough**cough*). I mean, Hidekaz Himaruya could have just left it at Canada being a pushover or something because he isn't invisible. ( He's just basically in the shadow of America. )

Sorry for ranting but it just makes me a bit mad. Anyways, cool story (I LUVS IT!) and rant over. :salute:
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:icongracee314:
gracee314 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
I'm glad you like it! Don't worry about ranting, I actually enjoy long comments (rant or otherwise)

All I have to counter is that it's more of a running gag than anything. But, in life, the actions of Canada are often overshadowed by the actions of Britain, America, etc., showing as Canada being "invisible." I guess the reason for America and Canada being twins is that they were "born" together when the British claimed America and a good chunk of Canada. But I agree that that would make more sense for Italy and Romano (they're the same country for pete's sake!) For the issue with Cuba, we know he hates America, and that he has a temper. That temper often gets in the way, and causes him to mistake innocent Canada for that obnoxious American.

*Takes breath*
Wow, didn't mean for that to go on that long. Sorry. That's my take on the whole "twin" thing. I do agree with you though, and thanks for telling me about the CanadaxNeterlands pairing, I've never seen that before. I'm really glad you enjoyed my story, and if you have a request, feel free to message me.
*Explanation/Thanks over*
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DreamingBlackLeo Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't why it bugs me. Anyways, you probably wouldn't have heard of Canada and Netherlands because there isn't much fanart or anything with them together at all. It's kinda weird considering the actual history between the two. Also Canada has help a lot of other countries too...I'm gonna stop now.(I'm American and I feel like I'll go to jail if I keep being so patriotic towards Canada.)
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:icongracee314:
gracee314 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Don't worry about it! (is also American) I really wish I was Canadian...
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:icondreamingblackleo:
DreamingBlackLeo Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Shame part about it is that a lake is keeping me from just walking there. CURSE YOU LAKE! :shakefish:
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:icongracee314:
gracee314 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Lucky! You only have a lake stopping you. I've got,like, at least 12 states stopping me. (I live in Georgia)
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:icondreamingblackleo:
DreamingBlackLeo Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
When all fails, blame Alfred. B-)
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:icongracee314:
gracee314 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Got that right :D
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:iconkittiesarecute:
kittiesarecute Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
:iconyaycanadaplz: :iconyayamericaplz:
....
wow
they must be blind :XD:
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:icongracee314:
gracee314 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
ikr? looking at them, there are obvious differences
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:iconkittiesarecute:
kittiesarecute Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
yep,love the story though :meow:
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:icongracee314:
gracee314 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Thank you! If you have a request, please message me
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:iconkittiesarecute:
kittiesarecute Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
alright
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:iconmemichow:
Memichow Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Student Writer
AMERICA AND CANADA LOOK DIFFERENT,AS YOU SEE AMERICA HAS A COWLICK WHILE CANADA HAS A CURL OF SOME-SORT.AMERICA IS SO LOUD AND CANADA IS NOT LOUD AT ALL.thats what makes them sexy...and cool.I think Canada's hair is longer than America's
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:icongracee314:
gracee314 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012
I AM AWARE OF THIS! yes, they are awesome. You're right too, Canada's hair is longer than Americas
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:iconmemichow:
Memichow Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Student Writer
I wanna rub England's eyebrows
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:icongracee314:
gracee314 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012
lol. good luck with that.
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:iconmemichow:
Memichow Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Student Writer
..i wonder what they feel like
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:icongracee314:
gracee314 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012
I have no clue how to respond to that. Love your icon btw
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:iconmemichow:
Memichow Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Student Writer
AWWWZIES THANKS
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:iconrina-san28:
Rina-san28 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww~!
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:icongracee314:
gracee314 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012
glad you like~ if you have a request please let me know!
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:iconrina-san28:
Rina-san28 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay~!
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nevershoutelric Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
how cute~!!! :D
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:icongracee314:
gracee314 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
thank you!
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:iconiscribblekirklandz:
iScribbleKirklandz Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE IT!
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:iconiggydanceplz:
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gracee314 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
I'm glad! If you have any more requests, please let me know.
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